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Author Notes: House of Prair, Den of Thieves

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As is apparent from comments that I have made elsewhere, I like private eye mysteries. When I sat down to write my first novel, the genre seemed like a natural for my initial venture into long form fiction. I had written for the theater, so the length was not off-putting. Otherwise, I had worked mainly in short stories and poetry. The advantage, I thought, to a private eye mystery was that I would be working in a form that gave me structure as well as a few tropes that I could rely upon as I found my way.

Unfortunately, I was the person who sat in the audience and wondered why the playwright couldn’t just have Hamlet go straight to his step-father and kill him. That would make for an interesting story, too. His mother might just accept that outcome. Polonius was never going to complain about much. Laertes might object, but only until Hamlet takes Ophelia’s hand and makes her queen. Of course, it would be utter crap as a psychological analysis and it really doesn’t sing as potential poetry.

So, instead, I started writing a mystery novel. Being me, I immediately tried to subvert all the usual private detective requirements. The archetype is not too far afield from a knight in shining armor. He has just enough wisdom to get out of trouble and the gumption necessary to find the trouble in the first place.

I created a “private detective”

who has quit the business. He has left the environment where he might have known his way around- maybe even pushed out of town by a dame. He has no office, leaving little hope of those classic scenes where Marlowe finds his next client waiting for him.

Author Notes House Prair Den Thieves

Then, there is always the question of whether or not the plot of the story would have happened with or without the actions of the protagonist. Chandler made Marlowe integral to the forward movement, but it is a question worth asking about a lot of detective mysteries.

Morgan Prair is more passive than most, though he is certainly not the first reluctant investigator. In the end, the villains of the piece only suffer because of Prair’s involvement. I do think the wrong man was going to be convicted of at least one murder without Morgan’s assistance.

More than cozy mysteries, private eye mysteries have often come out of a writer’s desire to comment on the world around them. By moving through their investigation, they uncover the shameful and the ignorant. I tried to honor that though I admit that I may have missed the mark. Twenty five years on, I might be even angrier about some of the issues I highlight.

The sequel, Prair for Mercy, goes more directly into issues of right and wrong. I hope you find this first book enjoyable enough to follow along.

Holiday Gift Giving Deal!

Two books! Signed! $25, including shipping!

Holiday Gift Giving Deal 2

House of Prair, Den of Thieves is due out this weekend, but I wanted to offer this deal with enough time for me to send books out for all your holiday gift giving needs.

Message me that you are interested by end of day, Sunday, December 11, 2016, and I will send you a signed copy of House of Prair, Den of Thieves and a signed copy of The Politician’s Peregrination with all effort put into having them arrive by  December 25.

How this will work:

Message me on Facebook Messenger or via email or whatever other means you have of usually contacting me. Send me $25 by end of day Monday, December 12, 2016, via PayPal. I will give you those details in my reply. (Ask me if PayPal is an issue for you.) Tell me how you want the inscriptions to read in the books.
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Disclaimers:

Price is good for shipping to continental U.S. Ask if you live elsewhere.
Ordering the books from your favorite internet retailer will run you about the same price, give or take a few pennies, but they will be able to send it to you overnight, which I cannot do at this price.
Both books will be available on ebook readers shortly. The Politician’s Peregrination already is. They cost only $2.99 that way. Once again that is without my signing them. I am happy to sign your ebook reader if you see me about, if that makes you feel any better.
Of course, you can order the books signed from me any time forward, but the price may change. Also, I can’t guarantee future turnaround time.

As a reward for reading all of that, the first person who wants to replace the signed copy of House of Prair, Den of Thieves with the writer’s proof, signed by me, is welcome to it. The only differences from the final published version are: 1) first three pages have a less attractive font; 2) a blank page has been inserted at pp. 202; 3) the back cover copy is reversed top and bottom; and 4) the last page has Proof printed across it.

Author Notes: The Politician’s Peregrination

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Back in the halcyon days of the late 2000s, the most visible way to express your support for a particular candidate was to place their sign in your front yard. You could always drag yourself to one of their rallies or really go crazy and volunteer for their campaign. Sure, Uncle Screwloose might drink a little too much at the family picnic and spout some opinion that the rest of the family would disavow to a greater or lesser degree. After all, Uncle Screwloose had been a known troublemaker his whole life without enough brainpower to light a candle.

Like many people, Uncle Screwloose had a worse opinion among his family than he did among his friends, who called him Frank and generally saw the wisdom of his thoughts because they heard those thoughts when he was sober. Also, they had chosen to frequent the same social activities and live in the same neighborhood.

I was frustrated with the level of political discourse ten years ago (truth be told, that had been the case for a long time). I knew that I had something to say, but I had no way in. As a nation, we seemed to have forgotten many of the qualities to which we had long aspired. That’s the important piece, however. We aspire to be a nation that is blind to a person’s race or faith. We aspire to be a nation that protects the minority from the tyranny of the majority. We aspire to give power to the people through representative democracy.

I felt myself throwing up my hands in the face of arguments that seemed calculated to reduce and change our aspirations. It used to be that we only had to worry about learning prejudices from our elders- now our elders are better people, but our media and our leaders have become vile. Must we really argue about stem cell research when we could be providing healthy meals in our schools? Do we really need to divide ourselves about abortion and guns when we ought to be united about bridges and cancer research? Has anybody really thought about how hard the mainstream political parties have had to work to find issues that make us think we are a nation filled with internal conflict? Isn’t a lot of this no different from dryer lint? You didn’t know it was an issue with a good side and bad side until someone told you. People faced with making decisions about guns or abortion probably had enough going on in their lives that no one needed to throw politics into the mix. Where empathy and support go, politics should not follow.

Within academic circles, Magic realism seems to become all the rage every other decade. Someone rediscovers the fact that South Americans have written books and the graduate theses practically write themselves. Then you have people like me that just like the words. “Magic realism” practically rolls off the tongue if you are a writer with an overactive imagination. Combine that with a notepad at bedside and you will find some weird starting places for stories.

So, Magic realism gave me an in. The useless talk of pundits who depended on false dichotomies made it seem to me that the best way to talk back to them might be with the powerful voices that they claimed to represent.  Thus, I picked a few choice characters from mythology.

The book is a ramble round Rochester with a very unlikely batch of heroes. Hercules always seemed like a given. I made a list with too many possibilities. Once Hercules came alive, the others fell into place. For the record, I would probably stay on the phone with him if he cold-called me (read the book).

Cyril Brand is not terribly likable at the beginning, but he grows on you, hopefully. He has grown on me. The most interesting discovery for me was how he gains a certain nobility through his tragedy. When I was planning the book, I fully expected him to succumb to the needs of the Senator’s campaign. Death always seemed to be his likeliest path to redemption.

What’s with the Italian and the opera references? The tone of the book proved a challenge. I felt that it was important to avoid any distancing irony, which may be a weird thing to say when you dress Gilgamesh like Philip Marlowe. Operas tend to run to the extremes of emotional expression without much self-comment. Aida might tell you that she is about to die, but she never reflects on her demise with a smirk and a witticism. I knew that I would be dealing with situations that bordered on the ridiculous and wanted to allow room for the humor. At the same time, I knew what was coming and felt that it would do a disservice if I failed to write the pain as anything less than a reality. Sometimes operatic-level emotions do intrude into our lives. At other times, we are trapped in a theatre of the absurd.

Strange as it may seem, I think the book offers a reality check for anyone lost in the political discourse of social media. Tweets and posts and blogs are no more considered thought than Odin or Uncle Sam are actual people. The speed of the Internet outraces our ability to think clearly. We all sound slightly intoxicated (remember Uncle Screwloose) when we post because some part of us recognizes just how ephemeral those thoughts are. The weight of all the political posts on Facebook is as nothing compared to the death of a single soldier.

Why Rochester? The city is an anomaly in my experience, having maintained a decent standard of living through successive downturns in the businesses that made the place thrive in the first place. Still, the symphony and the theatre survive. The many universities no doubt offer some explanation. I knew that any candidate worth his salt would pay obeisance at some point to the monetary spigot in Rochester. Once I had the locale, the locations that would be visited became… a challenge. Businesses came and went even as I wrote. In the end, I worked with almost all real places, but they may have been altered to fit the needs of the story. I would not use the book as a map, but that doesn’t mean you couldn’t make a night of it. Who knows who you will run into?